Here is my comparison between my draft script in LO3, compared to my updated script in LO4. Based on the feedback me and my group gained from Vicky (from Sheffield Live) I updated the script, relying on Vicky's input and improvements to help me correctly complete this task. Everything highlighted in yellow, are the items I updated in my script. The highlighted parts consist of spelling mistakes, that I've correctly altered, a selection of too informal text that I've made more formal and professional looking (based on Vicky's feedback) and new text that I've added to relate to the sheffield based suggestion that Vicky recommended.
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